Here is the link to the short story I wrote. Please give me some feedback on what you thought of it. It was my first one but some seem to like it.
I don't know what you are talkling about what book?
I like your writing style, with simple, non confusing sentences. However, maybe you should put more adjectives in your story. Well, I'm not really competent critic, I always put too many adjectives. So, the best is middle! :)
I don't know what you are talkling about what book?
I like your writing style, with simple, non confusing sentences. However, maybe you should put more adjectives in your story. Well, I'm not really competent critic, I always put too many adjectives. So, the best is middle! :)