What do you think of this poem I got published from a company on the internet?

I have my poem published at this website. Please go there and tell me what you think of it. If you like my work please try some of my other work. Most of it is pretty good for a amateur.

 http://www.associatedcontent.com/article/895003/alone.html?cat=10

I have got a lot of people who like this one. You got to keep in mind I am still am amateur when I wrote this one.