Aug 22nd, 2008 | Poetry survey

What do you think of this? With all my passion I could feel your heart beating like one rocket shunning the dark side of the moon. I know that once and for all that true love will last and forever to come.


This is a poem i free wrote on the top of my head. What do you think for a amateur with very little practice? I have got other work published but not too many yet.



By Anewlight
20 votes, 87 views , 1 comment
 
 
Poll tags:Poetry, Art, Writing

 
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Drowlord
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Drowlord
Texas, United States

posted Aug 26th, 2008 at 09:37 CDT

I'm not big on poetry.  In fact, I don't usually like music that has a lot of words in it.  Instrumental music (classical, old jazz, techno, soundtracks) make me happy, or songs with clever (rather than emotive) lyrics.
 
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